The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.
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The pie charts compare the different ratings of customer
service
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surveyed 100 guests in the Parkway Hotel in two separate years.
It is clear that
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consumers became more satisfied with the hotel
service
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over the period shown as the ratings of “excellent” and “good” witnessed an increase,
while
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the proportions of negative
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declined to varying degrees. In 2005, only 5% of customers considered the hotel
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excellent,
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the figure grew approximately sixfold in five years, to 28%. The trend was the same for marking the
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as “good”, which rose from 14% to 39%, making up the biggest portion of the survey.
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, the year 2010 saw the percentage of rating as “very poor” plummet from 45% to 17%, which was followed by satisfactory
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, with the proportion decreasing by 9% in the second survey. At the same time,
although
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a quarter of
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rated the
service
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as “poor” in 2005, the figure was cut by three quarters in 2010, at 4% which became the least popular
feedback
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.
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