The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
A married woman that had no child will tend to spend 30
hours
a week
doing unpaid work
such
as housework. As far as a married man with no children
was concern
, he regularly spent less than 20 Wrong verb form
concerned
hours
in one week
doing unpaid work
. A married woman that has one or two children
will spend 20 hours
in
a Change preposition
apply
week
longer than those who had no child doing unpaid work
which was mostly childcare or housework, although
the duration of men doing unpaid work
remained the same with those who had no children
which was around 20 hours
. For the
married women that had more than three Correct article usage
apply
children
, they will spend a whopping 60 hours
doing unpaid work
a week
. On the other hand
, married men will spend less time doing unpaid work
than those who had one or two or even no children
at all mainly because they need more money for the family.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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