The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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The given chart illustrates the
percentage
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of
households
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that owned and rented
accommodation
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in England and Wales From 1918 and 2011. It can be seen from the graph that
while
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the
percentage
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of
households
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in owned
accommodation
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increased significantly between 1918 to 2011, There was a considerable decrease in
households
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in rented
accommodation
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. Looking at the
households
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owning
accommodation
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,
it is clear that
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the
percentage
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of families who owned houses rose greatly from approximately 22% to 31% between 1918 and 1939.
In contrast
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, they maintained the same level at about 31% between 1939 and 1953.
Moreover
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,
although
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the
percentage
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of
households
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in owned houses recovered from 1953 to 1991 and reached approximately 68% , there was a period of stability from 1991 to 2001 and there was a marginal drop from 2001 to 2011. Turning next to families who had rented
accommodation
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, it can be seen that the
percentage
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of
households
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in rented
accommodation
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was at the highest in 1918 about 78% and it remained unchanged from 1939 to 1953. There was a notable reduction in
households
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who lived in rented houses between 1953 to 1971 and it experienced a dip between 1991 and 2001.
However
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, it rose slightly
at the end
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of the given period of time.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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