the graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002.it includes thoes with a degree,those with a higher degree and those with other qualifications.

the graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002.it includes thoes with a degree,those with a higher degree and those with other qualifications.
The comparison of weekly
earnings
in terms of different
ages
is illustrated by a line graph which is presented. As can be seen clearly from the graph, all indicated group
earnings
increased significantly during examined
ages
.
While
the others rose with some fluctuations, the
overall
of higher degree and first degree is gradually increased. As the graph denoted, the other group reached a peak of just over 800 at the
age
of 36-40, which resulted in gradually increasing over 15
years
from 400 at the beginning of 21-25. As the
ages
pass, the other earning decreased slightly by over 100 and finished at almost 700 at the
age
of 56-60.
In contrast
, higher-degree
earnings
started at less than 400 at the
age
of 21-25 followed by more than 300 over 25
years
. After slighted decrees for 10
years
, the
earnings
fell up and finished at almost 800. regarding first-degree
earnings
is at least 300, thereby being the lowest beginning at
age
21-25. As time passes, the earning experienced an increase of 400
along with
remaining constant for 5 period
years
. Afterwards, first-degree
earnings
finished at their peak amount at
ages
36-40 nearly 700 after faced up a moderate decline at
age
46-50.
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