DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES: International tourism has contributed both positive and negative effects to the local community. Do you think the advantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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In my
openion
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opinion
, local communities receiving
forigners
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foreigners
for visit benefit more than they
loose
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.
This
is
firstly
beacuse
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because
tourism
helps the local
businesses
flourish and
secondly
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it increases the chances of international investment. International
tourism
in any given
place
benefits several
businesses
in its surrounding which
inturn
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increases the
overall
economy of the local
community
. When a
tourist
visits a
place
, he/she will need to find
accomodation
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accommodation
for the number of days they are
visisting
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visiting
,
therefore
he will book hotels and add to the local hotel
business
of that
community
. Now once the
tourist
has his
accomodation
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accommodation
sorted, he will want to try the local
food
of that
place
, when he makes the purchase of traditional
food
, he adds to
to
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the
food
and beverage industry.
Along with
food
, he or she will want to visit the
tourist
attractions, so the visitors will use local transport,
this
will benefit the transportation industry and in
this
way, any transaction done by the
toursit
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tourist
from the local
business
will enable the local
community
to
benift
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benefit
which
inturn
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in turn
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they can invest in
overall
infrastructure and
further
develop the
place
and attract more
tourist
. The best example
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this
is Goa, where because of the continuous presence of international
toursist
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tourists
tourist
local
businesses
have benefitted enormously and enabled the
locals
to develop their
exisiting
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existing
facilities and attract more tourists
anually
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annually
manually
. One of the biggest perks of international
tourism
is international investments. When
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people visit any unknown
toursist
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tourist
destination for leisure and find potential to make money, they will end up investing in these places. They usually invest by becoming partners with the
locals
for ease of
business
in that area.
Therefore
, the
locals
now benefit from international investment by improvising their existing
businesses
or being a part of new ventures which will add to their experience and income. Sometimes, if
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forigne
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foreign
foreigner
business
people find potential in local cuisine ,
the
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they
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will request
for
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its
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franchise in their home country which
also
benefits the
locals
.
For example
, Dubai has attracted several
forign
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foreign
investments over the
last
two decades because of which today it has become one of the most diverse, multi-cultural, multi-cuisine
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across the world. In conclusion, the only negative
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a
place
could have because of
forign
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foreign
tourism
would be
the
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a
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change in culture but
apart from
this
there is no other
down side
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downside
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but only
upside
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an upside
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,
therefore
the pros exceed the cons in a local
community
because of
forign
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foreign
tourism
.
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