DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES: International tourism has contributed both positive and negative effects to the local community. Do you think the advantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

In my

openion

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opinion

, local communities receiving

forigners

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foreigners

for visit benefit more than they

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is

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beacuse

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because

tourism

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helps the local

businesses

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flourish and

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secondly

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it increases the chances of international investment. International

tourism

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in any given

place

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benefits several

businesses

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in its surrounding which

inturn

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in turn

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increases the

overall

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economy of the local

community

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. When a

tourist

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visits a

place

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, he/she will need to find

accomodation

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accommodation

for the number of days they are

visisting

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visiting

,

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he will book hotels and add to the local hotel

business

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of that

community

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. Now once the

tourist

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has his

accomodation

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accommodation

sorted, he will want to try the local

food

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of that

place

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, when he makes the purchase of traditional

food

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, he adds to

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the

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and beverage industry.

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food

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, he or she will want to visit the

tourist

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attractions, so the visitors will use local transport,

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will benefit the transportation industry and in

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way, any transaction done by the

toursit

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tourist

from the local

business

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will enable the local

community

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to

benift

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benefit

which

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they can invest in

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infrastructure and

further

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develop the

place

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and attract more

tourist

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. The best example

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is Goa, where because of the continuous presence of international

toursist

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tourists

tourist

local

businesses

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have benefitted enormously and enabled the

locals

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to develop their

exisiting

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existing

facilities and attract more tourists

anually

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annually

manually

. One of the biggest perks of international

tourism

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is international investments. When

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business minded

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people visit any unknown

toursist

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tourist

destination for leisure and find potential to make money, they will end up investing in these places. They usually invest by becoming partners with the

locals

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for ease of

business

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in that area.

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, the

locals

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now benefit from international investment by improvising their existing

businesses

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or being a part of new ventures which will add to their experience and income. Sometimes, if

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forigne

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foreign

foreigner

business

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people find potential in local cuisine ,

the

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they

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will request

for

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its

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franchise in their home country which

also

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benefits the

locals

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, Dubai has attracted several

forign

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foreign

investments over the

last

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two decades because of which today it has become one of the most diverse, multi-cultural, multi-cuisine

destination

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across the world. In conclusion, the only negative

affects

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a

place

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could have because of

forign

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foreign

tourism

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would be

the

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change in culture but

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there is no other

down side

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but only

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,

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the pros exceed the cons in a local

community

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because of

forign

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foreign

tourism

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.