DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES: International tourism has contributed both positive and negative effects to the local community. Do you think the advantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

In my

openion

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opinion

, local communities receiving

forigners

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foreigners

for visit benefit more than they

loose

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.

This

is

firstly

beacuse

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because

tourism

helps the local

businesses

flourish and

secondly

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it increases the chances of international investment. International

tourism

in any given

place

benefits several

businesses

in its surrounding which

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increases the

overall

economy of the local

community

. When a

tourist

visits a

place

, he/she will need to find

accomodation

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accommodation

for the number of days they are

visisting

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visiting

,

therefore

he will book hotels and add to the local hotel

business

of that

community

. Now once the

tourist

has his

accomodation

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accommodation

sorted, he will want to try the local

food

of that

place

, when he makes the purchase of traditional

food

, he adds to

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the

food

and beverage industry.

Along with

food

, he or she will want to visit the

tourist

attractions, so the visitors will use local transport,

this

will benefit the transportation industry and in

this

way, any transaction done by the

toursit

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tourist

from the local

business

will enable the local

community

to

benift

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benefit

which

inturn

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they can invest in

overall

infrastructure and

further

develop the

place

and attract more

tourist

. The best example

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this

is Goa, where because of the continuous presence of international

toursist

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tourists

tourist

local

businesses

have benefitted enormously and enabled the

locals

to develop their

exisiting

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existing

facilities and attract more tourists

anually

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annually

manually

. One of the biggest perks of international

tourism

is international investments. When

business minded

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people visit any unknown

toursist

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tourist

destination for leisure and find potential to make money, they will end up investing in these places. They usually invest by becoming partners with the

locals

for ease of

business

in that area.

Therefore

, the

locals

now benefit from international investment by improvising their existing

businesses

or being a part of new ventures which will add to their experience and income. Sometimes, if

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forigne

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foreign

foreigner

business

people find potential in local cuisine ,

the

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will request

for

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its

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franchise in their home country which

also

benefits the

locals

.

For example

, Dubai has attracted several

forign

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foreign

investments over the

last

two decades because of which today it has become one of the most diverse, multi-cultural, multi-cuisine

destination

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across the world. In conclusion, the only negative

affects

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a

place

could have because of

forign

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foreign

tourism

would be

the

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change in culture but

apart from

this

there is no other

down side

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but only

upside

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,

therefore

the pros exceed the cons in a local

community

because of

forign

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foreign

tourism

.