You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Explain the reason for the celebration Give details of your visit to the restaurant Say what you would like the restaurant to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear

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, I am writing

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letter to share my experience regarding your "Brampton Brar" restaurant when I and my peer had

meal

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on August 10th. Recently, I got promoted

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head registered nurse at my workplace.

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, I decided to celebrate

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happiness with my closet

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, we had

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dinner at your location. On that

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, we reserved table 9, and around 7:30P.M. we reached the restaurant.

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, a waiter named Harbhajan Singh took the order. After 20 minutes, our order came to our table with certain complimentary snacks and two orange juice bottles. Even though it was a really great celebration for me, I would really appreciate it if you could decrease the time of food serving. As twenty minutes are hard to wait.

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, it would be highly advantageous if you could enlarge the seating area. I hope you would comprehend me, and I am looking forward to your prompt action. Yours faithfully, Rajwinder Kaur Brar

rajwinder85913Sun Aug 06 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

165 words

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