You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Explain the reason for the celebration Give details of your visit to the restaurant Say what you would like the restaurant to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses

Dear
sir
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or
madam
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Madam
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, I am writing
this
letter to share my experience regarding your "Brampton Brar" restaurant when I and my peer had
meal
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a meal
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on August 10th. Recently, I got promoted
as
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to
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a
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apply
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head registered nurse at my workplace.
Therefore
, I decided to celebrate
this
happiness with my closet
one
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.
Then
, we had
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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dinner at your location. On that
friday
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Friday
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, we reserved table 9, and around 7:30P.M. we reached the restaurant.
Following
this
, a waiter named Harbhajan Singh took the order. After 20 minutes, our order came to our table with certain complimentary snacks and two orange juice bottles. Even though it was a really great celebration for me, I would really appreciate it if you could decrease the time of food serving. As twenty minutes are hard to wait.
Also
, it would be highly advantageous if you could enlarge the seating area. I hope you would comprehend me, and I am looking forward to your prompt action. Yours faithfully, Rajwinder Kaur Brar
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