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The similarities between travelling alone and in a group

Today, many
people
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 enjoy
traveling
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 during their free time. By
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, they can reduce the amount of stress that they have because of their work and studies, and they can
also
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 learn many new things.
While
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 some prefer to
travel
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 alone, others enjoy
traveling
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 in a
group
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.
However
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, some do not know which one is a better choice.
Therefore
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, knowing the
similarities
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 and
differences
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 between these two will help them to make a great choice. There are a few
similarities
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 and
differences
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 between
traveling
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 alone and
traveling
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 in a
group
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. There are a few
similarities
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 between
traveling
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 alone and
traveling
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 in a
group
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. First of all, they are similar in
the
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method
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 of
travel
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.
People
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 who
travel
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 alone can
travel
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 either by
an
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airplane
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,
a
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train,
a
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bus or by using their car.
Similarly
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,
people
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 who
travel
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 in a
group
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also
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 can have the same
method
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 of
traveling
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according to
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 their preferences and budget.
Besides
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 that, both of them educate
people
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. When
people
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travel
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 alone, they can learn many new things;
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, they can learn about new customs and cultures in a new place.
Similarly
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,
people
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 who
travel
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 in a
group
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also
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 will have the same opportunity, which will give many benefits to their lives.
For instance
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, when Libyan tourists who
travel
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 in a
group
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 or individually visit Malaysia, they will learn Malaysian customs and cultures.
Last
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 but not least,
people
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 who
travel
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 alone and
travel
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 in a
group
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 can make new
friends
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. It can be noticed that
people
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 who
travel
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 alone usually make new
friends
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 when they visit a new place.
Likewise
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,
people
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 who
travel
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 in a
group
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 can meet
people
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 from different backgrounds, which can later be their
friends
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.
To conclude
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,
traveling
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 alone and
traveling
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 in a
group
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 are similar in the
method
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 of
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traveling
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, educational benefits, and networking.
Although
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 there are few
similarities
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 between
traveling
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 alone and
traveling
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 in a
group
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, the
differences
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 are remarkable. First and foremost, they differ in
freedom
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.
People
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 who
travel
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 alone have the
freedom
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 to do anything they wish without asking permission from anyone.
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, if someone travels to an island alone, he/she can stay on the beach for hours without thinking about others.
In contrast
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,
people
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 who
travel
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 in a
group
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 have to do everything with their
friends
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 together, and they have to get permission from each other before doing anything. Equally importantly, they are
also
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 different in cost.
People
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 who
travel
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 alone usually spend more
money
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 because they have to pay for everything by themselves.
On the other hand
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,
people
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 who
travel
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 in a
group
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 do not have to spend much
money
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 because they can share their expenses and
this
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 can save
their
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money
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.
For example
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,
people
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 who
travel
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 in a
group
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 can stay in the same hotel room and share their
money
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 to pay for their accommodation.
Finally
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, they differ in self-reliance.
People
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 who
travel
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 alone are always independent. It can be noticed that
people
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 who
travel
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 alone usually handle their tasks all by themselves. Differently,
people
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 who
travel
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 in a
group
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 are always reliable towards each other, which makes them very dependent.
To sum up
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, the
differences
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 between
traveling
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 alone and
traveling
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 in a
group
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 are
freedom
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, cost, and self-reliance. In short, the
similarities
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 and
differences
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 between
traveling
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 alone and
traveling
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 in a
group
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 are striking. Both of them are the same in the
method
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 of
travel
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, educational benefits, and networking.
Nonetheless
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, they differ in
freedom
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, cost, and self-reliance. From what has been mentioned above,
people
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 surely can make a great comparison and choose the best type of
traveling
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 that they think
suitable
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 for them

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