The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the amount of

energy

produced by five different

energy

sources, in the

in 2014 and 2018.

Overall

it is clear that

gas was the majority of

energy

source in both years,

although

the use of renewable

energy

was almost double in the 4-year period.

According to

the first picture, gas was the most common

fuel

used in the

in 2014, accounting for 30.1% of the total

fuel

This

was followed by nuclear and coal, which in total comprised half of the

energy

sources in the

in 2014. The least popular fuels were renewable and oil which accounted for 15% and 4% respectively. In 2018, there was a significant change in the proportion of renewable

energy

use in the

. Indeed, renewable

energy

became the second most popular

fuel

, accounting for more than a quarter of the total

energy

sources.

Whereas

, Gas was still the most common source of

energy

production, standing at 30.1% of the Total. Oil and other remained the least

fuel

used in the

, and coal and nuclear power comprising of 18.1% and 21.6% respectively.

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