People who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch TV. Agree or Disagree?
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Whilst
people
think reading books
increase
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increases
people
's Imagination
because book
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the book
a book
for
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of
knowledge
whereas
many think who
watch Correct pronoun usage
those who
Tv
does not have better Imagination
quality
,waste
of time .I think both sides have Correct article usage
a waste
its
own Correct pronoun usage
their
significant
.
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significance
a
huge amount of Add the preposition
with a
knowledge
. There are many story
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storybooks
books
which help to raise creativity quality
into us. By reading those books
we start to think differently ,Correct word choice
and starts
starts
observing things around us . Correct subject-verb agreement
start
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,Moreover
Imagination
quality
change
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changes
the
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our
outliik
of Correct your spelling
outlook
ours
and provide us Correct pronoun usage
our
the
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with the
oppoetunity
to explore the talent to become Correct your spelling
opportunity
writer
. Add an article
a writer
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, by reading Human Ahmad
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Ahmad's
books
people
will start thinking ditterently
like him and Correct your spelling
differently
also
will try to adapt
the creativity Correct your spelling
adopt
quality
into themselves which will help to improve the
Change the word
their
imagination
power.
On the other hand
, though TV
have
lots of shows , some are useful for us Change the verb form
has
some
are bad . Correct word choice
and some
However
, many educational and entertainment show helps us to
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improve
Imagination
quality
but also
inspires
us to participate Correct subject-verb agreement
inspire
into
them . Change preposition
in
TV
gives practical knowledge
whereas
book
give Fix the agreement mistake
books
imagination
knowledge
.For example
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the spelling
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Indian
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the indian
indian
Idol show are inspiring
many children to Change the capitalization
Indian
perticipate
into that and those are improving the creativity Correct your spelling
participate
quality
as well .
But TV
has many distraction
which is Change to a plural noun
distractions
waste
of time and Correct article usage
a waste
also
has bad
impact on Add an article
a bad
people
.
In conclusion , watching TV
and reading books
both helps us to improve our Imagination
quality
in different
way . Add an article
a different
However
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,However
TV
has more distraction
but If we will avoid those Fix the agreement mistake
distractions
then
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can get Correct pronoun usage
We
advantage
from it . For Correct article usage
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