You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr Barnes, I am writing
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want to ask
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you to
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in the head office company
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Indonesia. As you know, I study
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a master
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two years ago and
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need to go to Indonesia to
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my final project research for my master, maybe
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need six
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my research. You still can call me by text or you can call my assistant Joey when
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leave the head office
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here, I absolutely always doing my work here. Can you
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when
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can go to Indonesia? I look forward to hearing from you
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sincerely Miftachul Anam
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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