In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV drama?
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people
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crime
novels
and TV misconduct dramas.
There are many reasons for this
situation in the society. There for what are the reasons, and my opinion I am going to explain further
paragraph with relevant example.
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like to watch thrilling episodes. Because,
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crime
stories more entertainments
rather than other programs. For an instant, some Bollywood movies are full of violent Replace the word
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. But like this
action
performing well industries. As well as
they know very well this
serious harm to society. However
they try to give Add a comma
,However
people
just enjoy watching murder action
, using guns..etc. As a result
, people
not only enjoy they are trying to get experience. Therefore
, nowadays, everywhere were increased crime
cases.
On the other hand
, many readers are addict
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addicted
crime
novels
. Therefore
main reason is some writers try to give happiness to readers. Especially the horror events that are included in the whole story
and often the story
ends with a murder. Thus
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As
this
moment so many younger people
like to read crime
novels
and always they try to get experiences as a story
. For Instance
: so many younger people
read Sherlock's novel.
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To
crime
dramas and novels
break society's rules and regulations. Nowadays in this
world, day
by day
grow crime
situation
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