In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV drama?

In
this
world
day
by
day
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several
people
are
addict
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to
crime
novels
and TV misconduct dramas. There are many reasons for
this
situation in the society. There for what are the reasons, and my opinion I am going to explain
further
paragraph with relevant example. On the one hand, many
people
like to watch thrilling episodes. Because
,
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it is
activity
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to
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the audience long-lasting entertainment. Especially, they find
crime
stories more
entertainments
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rather than other programs. For an instant, some Bollywood movies are full of violent
action
. But like
this
action
performing well industries.
As well as
they know very well
this
serious harm to society.
However
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they try to give
people
just enjoy watching murder
action
, using guns..etc.
As a result
,
people
not only enjoy they are trying to get experience.
Therefore
, nowadays, everywhere were increased
crime
cases.
On the other hand
, many readers are
addict
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addicted
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to
crime
novels
.
Therefore
main reason is some writers try to give happiness to readers. Especially the horror events that are included in the whole
story
and often the
story
ends with a murder.
Thus
, not only that, all over the
story
very clearly explain how to do
crime
action
.
as
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a result at
this
moment so many younger
people
like to read
crime
novels
and always they try to get experiences as a
story
.
For Instance
: so many younger
people
read Sherlock's novel.
TO
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conclude, in my point of view
crime
dramas and
novels
break society's rules and regulations. Nowadays in
this
world,
day
by
day
grow
crime
situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
show examples
. It would be better to give the message to the youth crowds,
crime
has to play very badly.
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