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In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV drama?

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 and TV misconduct dramas. There are many reasons for
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 situation in the society. There for what are the reasons, and my opinion I am going to explain
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the audience long-lasting entertainment. Especially, they find
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 stories more
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 rather than other programs. For an instant, some Bollywood movies are full of violent
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 performing well industries.
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 they try to give
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 just enjoy watching murder
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, using guns..etc.
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,
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 not only enjoy they are trying to get experience.
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, nowadays, everywhere were increased
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 cases.
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, many readers are
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 to
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novels
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 main reason is some writers try to give happiness to readers. Especially the horror events that are included in the whole
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 and often the
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 ends with a murder.
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, not only that, all over the
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 very clearly explain how to do
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action
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 a result at
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 moment so many younger
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 like to read
crime
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novels
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 and always they try to get experiences as a
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 read Sherlock's novel.
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 conclude, in my point of view
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 dramas and
novels
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 break society's rules and regulations. Nowadays in
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day
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 grow
crime
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situation
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. It would be better to give the message to the youth crowds,
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 has to play very badly.
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