The table below gives information about the underground railway Systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway Systems in six cities.
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The table provides data on the underground
railway
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structure in six
cities
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.
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, the three oldest
railway
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systems, In London, Paris, and Tokyo have longer routes and carry many more
passengers
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than the three in Washington DC. Kyoto and Los Angeles. Opening in 1863, and covering 384 kilometres, London was the oldest and the longest of the system among six
cities
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.
Railway
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systems opened in Paris, in 1900 and Tokyo, in 1927. These
two
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cities
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hold the highest number of
passengers
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,
that is
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1927
million
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for Tokyo and 1191
million
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for Paris. Kyoto in 1981 and Los Angeles in 2001 are the
last
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two
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cities
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with the shortest routes, at 11 and 28 kilometres respectively.
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. These
two
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networks are used by the smallest number of
passengers
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per year, at 45 and 6
million
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respectively. Compared with the
two
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networks mentioned above, Washington DC 's
railway
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structure was the longer, at 126
kilometers
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, and has a relatively large number of
passengers
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count at 144
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, cities, passengers, two, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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