You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Alex, I hope you are doing great and thanks for considering my advice,

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making the most important decision of your life. Today, I have been writing to you in correspondence to the letter you

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me a few days back, in fact, I wish it could assist you as well

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. As far as I know, you would not enjoy going to college and you do not have much experience of how business works, you would find difficulty in adjusting there. In fact, I want to tell you from my experience directly going to college was not really a good idea.

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, if you would work it would assist you to develop essential skills that would definitely help you in scoring well. To put it forth, at a job you would gain knowledge about time management skills, coordinating with the team, problem-solving techniques, and other essential skills. As per my considerations, working as a customer representative at a restaurant or small firm would be a great opportunity for you,

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, it would assist you to find a job later on as well since you will study a Business Administration course. I wish you good luck on your new journey, I will always be with you and I would be willing to help you whenever you need me. Warm wishes, Georgia Henry.

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Ensure that your letter addresses all parts of the task prompt clearly and fully.

coherence and cohesion

Organize your ideas more clearly and link them together to improve coherence and cohesion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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