You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Alex, I hope you are doing great and thanks for considering my advice,
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making the most important decision of your life. Today, I have been writing to you in correspondence to the letter you
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me a few days back, in fact, I wish it could assist you as well
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. As far as I know, you would not enjoy going to college and you do not have much experience of how business works, you would find difficulty in adjusting there. In fact, I want to tell you from my experience directly going to college was not really a good idea.
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, if you would work it would assist you to develop essential skills that would definitely help you in scoring well. To put it forth, at a job you would gain knowledge about time management skills, coordinating with the team, problem-solving techniques, and other essential skills. As per my considerations, working as a customer representative at a restaurant or small firm would be a great opportunity for you,
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, it would assist you to find a job later on as well since you will study a Business Administration course. I wish you good luck on your new journey, I will always be with you and I would be willing to help you whenever you need me. Warm wishes, Georgia Henry.
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Ensure that your letter addresses all parts of the task prompt clearly and fully.
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Organize your ideas more clearly and link them together to improve coherence and cohesion.
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