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some people work for the same organisation all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organisatiobs. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued topic that some folks work for the same organization throughout their professional journey
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whereas
 some people find it is better to keep switching their jobs. In
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 and cons of both of these approaches and will conclude the discussion by providing my views on the topic. One of the
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staying in the same company throughout is that you gain in-depth domain knowledge .
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, you are acclimatized
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your firm's policies and promotion cycle which means you know the
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nitty
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early promotions.
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, your experience is value addition to the company which can eventually help you rise to higher management levels in the organization quickly. Another advantage is that in case of any emergency or any sort of adverse
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, you would be able to get
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 help if you have
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 rapport with your line managers. For eg , one of my
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 who unfortunately had to undergo
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 process
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 with leave and finances. Since she had a decent tenure in the organization and good conduct, she
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received
 the needed assistance without any difficulty. Having said that, there are certain pitfalls of
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stagnancy
. As you are not changing your jobs , your
job
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, which can eventually stop employees from learning new things and remain
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uncompetitive
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, the percentage of
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recieved
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received
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 compared to the
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 annual hikes or the promotion provided.
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, switching jobs gives
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deeper insights into current trend going in the organizations and will eventually help you in the long run for the
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 of any layoffs or anything. Based on the above discussion, I strongly recommend that youth should keep on changing their
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 until
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specific
 age in order to reap better benefits of
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 rotation.
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