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look at the pictures, which show the process of making cherry jam. Complete the sentences with a verb from the box in the correct form.

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The diagram illustrates how to make cherry jam.
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, there are nine stages to get the finished cherry jam products. Beginning with harvesting fresh cherry from the tree, and ending with a cover label on the cherry's bottle jams. As can be seen from the diagram,
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 process is started by harvesting cherries from the tree. Following that, these cherries are transported to a factory to generate products. Before the cleaning stages in water, the leaves and stems are classified and removed to get only fruit left. Followed by preliminary processing and production, the seeds of the cherry are detached from the middle of the cherry, and using
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 flesh left for the next stage.
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 step is to combine these preliminarily processed cherries into a cylinder with some
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 enhancers. After shaking them together, there is a raw combination of cherry jam which will be checked by the quality inspector.
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, these qualified products are moved to the bottling and covering label step before coming to consumers.
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