The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate a cyclical process that the life cycle of
salmon
.
Overall
, the
salmon
involves in the third
stage
, which begins with birth, growing to become adults and ends with becoming adults.
First,
in the birth
stage
,
salmon
have laid their eggs in the upper river where water is at a slow-moving pace. They usually lie under the reeds and beside the small stones.
This
stage
takes about 3 to 6 months to grow as small
salmon
the length is between 3 to 8 cm.
Subsequently
, the small size of
salmon
keeps enlarging to smelting, and they move from the lower river to the sea. It takes 3 years for growing up to become an adult. The
last
stage
is the adult
stage
for
salmon
, in which 3 years is used for their development. In
this
stage
, the length of adult
salmon
has been length from 70 to 76 cm, which is nearly 5 times bigger than the previous
stage
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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