You are planning to go on a business trip. Write an email to the Human Resources Department: Where are you going? What is the purpose of your trip? How long are you going to stay? What is your itinerary (the places you will visit)? Who will you meet? Why are you going? Try to write a minimum of 50 words.

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"Dear Human Resources Department. I am writing

this

email to inform you about my business trip to Europe next month. Our client has invited our team to work on-site in their office for a couple of weeks to improve

the

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productivity,

as well as

strengthen our relationship.

Therefore

, I am planning to visit some of our client's offices in France and Ireland.

This

trip is expected to take 4 weeks.

Firstly

, I will travel to Paris to meet our co-workers, Arthur and Herve. I will stay there for one week, and after

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I will move to the next destination, Dublin, where I will meet the client CEO, Guido, and the rest of the team. If you have any

question

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or need

further

details, please feel free to contact me anytime. Sincerely. Anh"

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

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133 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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