The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
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The charts illustrate the proportion of spending on different goods and services of households in two different countries in 2010.
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it is clear that
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householders in both countries spent the largest proportion of their income on Housing and Hood,
while
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Healthcare was the service receiving the lowest share of expenditure. The proportion of spending on Housing was highest in Malaysia, at 34%
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Japanese families allocated just 21% of their budget for
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category. In terms of food, the figures for both nations were similar, at 24% and 27% for Malaysia and Japan respectively. Regarding the remaining categories, Transport accounted for exactly a fifth of total expenditure in Japan, twice as much as the figure for Malaysia. Healthcare received the least amount of money in the two countries
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the percentage of money spent on Other goods and services was quite significant, at over a quarter in each country.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household expenditures
  • proportion
  • cultural differences
  • economic differences
  • living standards
  • real estate market
  • public transportation
  • private transportation
  • infrastructure
  • government healthcare policies
  • quality of life
  • holistic view
  • inflation
  • economic growth
  • societal norms
  • globalization
  • communication expenses
  • education expenses
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