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The Graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 Summaries the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 Summaries the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The number of
shop
Change to a plural noun
shops
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 closed and opened between 2011-2018 from the graph.From the beginning
closures
shop
 has higher
numbers
 than
openings
shop
 around 1 thousand apart and decreased a bit each
years
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year
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. The
numbers
 of both
closures
 and
openings
shop
are
Unnecessary verb
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decreased the most in 2015 but the
numbers
 of
closures
shop
are
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quickly recovered in the next year but
openings
shop
’s line is continuously gone down
on
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in
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 the next year. Another big
different
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difference
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 between
closures
Correct article usage
the closures
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shop
 and
openings
Correct article usage
the openings
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shop
 is
closures
shop
numbers
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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very
Correct article usage
the very
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 least decline compared to
openings
Correct article usage
the openings
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shop
 from the base information on
graph
Add an article
a graph
the graph
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. In 2018 they ended up with
closures
shop
’s number 1 thousand higher than
openings
Correct article usage
the openings
show examples
shop
.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, closures, numbers, openings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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