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the chart below shows the proportion of british students at one university in england

the chart below shows the proportion of british students at one university in england
#proportion #british #students #university #england
The pie charts
illustrates
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 the
precentages
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percentages
percentage
 of British
students
 at one university in England who were manage to communicate
other
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in other
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languages
additionally
 English, in
years
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the years
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 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, comparing both charts speaking ability of Spanish, two other
languages
 and
another
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another language
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languages
were
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 higher in 2010 than
2000
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in 2000
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,
while
German
, French and no other
languages
 were lower. In 2000, 30% of British
students
who
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were
talent
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 to speak Spanish and it was the highest value
in
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 the other
languages
.
Secondly
, 20% of
students
 showed only speak English and
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could not communicate
any
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with any
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 other
language
 speakers viewed 15%.
Finally
,
German
 speakers and two other
languages
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 speakers revealed 10%. In 2010, except
German
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for German
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language
 communication, 5% growth expressed
other
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the other
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 5 sectors
such
 as
,
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apply
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 French, Spanish, another
language
, two other
languages
 and no other
language
.
However
,
German
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the German
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language speaking
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 talent of British
students
in addition
 to English in 2010
as
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was
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same
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the same
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 as
2000
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in 2000
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, languages, german, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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