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The maps depict the contemporary situation and the planned development in the

centre

of a small town which is named Islip, respectively. Over the period, the area will undergo remarkable developments. As it is obvious, the main

road

will be redeveloped with a dual carriageway roundabout

road

and in the middle of

this

road

, a way for pedestrians will be set up. ,

Also

this

revolution will make a place for commercial sites and new housing. The southern shops will

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in the same place. whilst, the upper shops will be destroyed to make a shopping

centre

. There will be allocated a bus station near the shopping

centre

and parking will be constructed at the east of the shopping

centre

.

In addition

, in the south area, the location of the school will not change,

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the

road

will be expanded until the park.

While

the park will become smaller to make place for new housing near the old ones.