The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Pie charts display the proportion amount of

Sodium

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, Saturated fats and added sugars in usual meals in the USA.

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, a large portion of dinner contains

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and saturated fats

whereas

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added

sugar

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is more in snacks.

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, during the other meals, the rest of the

nutrients

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are approximately similar to each other. As the meals continue some of the

nutrients

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also

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subsequently

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start to surge in quantity. In Breakfast, the three types of

nutrients

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are in almost similar quantity which is from 14% to 16%.

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in Lunch, the

nutrients

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could be seen to rise rapidly to more than 25% to 30%

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sugar

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which only increased by 3%. The major hike which can be seen is on the snack meal which relatively consumes more than 40%

Sugar

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, but these percentages are less in

Sodium

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and Saturated fat which is half of what

sugar

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is added in snacks. During the dinner meal, the percentages rapidly jumped to 43% and 37% of

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and Saturated fat respectively.

This

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dramatic growth was not seen in the Added

sugar

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dinner meal which was evidently less than 25%.

Melroy

Aug 7, 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, nutrients with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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