You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Cuttareeya Rassameerattayatham,
I
am Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
ABC Change the article
an
University
student, as my university
do
not have any Change the verb form
does
sport
facilities.
I am writing Change the noun form
sports
this
letter to request more information about the register
details and promotions.
In the first place, I am interested in long-term Replace the word
registration
member
, as I still have 4 years of Replace the word
membership
University
, and your place is just only 5
mins walk from my Correct article usage
a 5
university
, as it is very convenience
for me. Replace the word
convenient
Moreover
, I saw the promotion for student
on your website, which Fix the agreement mistake
students
it
was very compelling.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Consequently
, I just wondering if you
able to provide meAdd a verb
areyou
wereyou
a
condition of promotions,And Add the preposition
with a
also
I would like to know about the cost for
Change preposition
of
memdership
for Correct your spelling
membership
student
. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Furthermore
, would you be able to list me
all the facilities Change preposition
for me
appoximately
Correct your spelling
approximately
.
Change the punctuation
?
In addition
, I am actually interested in yoga classes as well, could you please send me a detail about this
as well?
Thank you in advance for this
information and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
CuttareeyaSubmitted by cat_dudick on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.