The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word
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The bar graph illustrates some differences
about
the percentage of humans born in Change preposition
in
Australia
and those outside Australia
(cities
, towns
and rural areas
) in 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, Cities
have a higher count of people
than rural areas
or towns
for both, population outside and in Australia
. The second highest place after cities
would be rural areas
and then
towns
. But that changes in 2010, as the city's population plummeted, towns
and rural Correct word choice
and towns
areas
have lesser and lesser people
born.
In 1995, cities
had a greater amount of people
being born. Not many people
were born in towns
while
rural areas
still had a considerable amount of people
birthing there. But compared to people
born in Australia
, people
born outside Australia
were born more in rural areas
. The popularity of people
being born in towns
lessened when the focus shifts to people
born outside Australia
.
For the record of 2010, the rate of people
born in Australia
and outside was high in cities
. Nevertheless
, people
born outside Australia
had a higher number (20 more compared to 1995) of people
being born in cities
. The trend of children being born in towns
and rural areas
lessens in 2010. People
living outside Australia
, giving birth in rural areas
almost becomes negligent. An extreme drop compared to the graph of 1995.Submitted by revatidave1503 on
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