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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams show the layout of
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Southwest
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airport
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 at present and its reconstruction next year.
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, the
airport
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 will be expanded, including the addition of some passenger facilities and a significant increase in the number of gates and doors. At present,
passengers
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 can enter the
airport
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 through the only entrance at a
departure
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 or an arrival entrance, both located at the bottom of the
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.
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 area, which has a cafe on the left-hand side and a check-in on the other side, is on the left of the building, the arrival space without facilities is to the right. Beyond these spaces are security areas. Customs and passport control can be entered by arrival
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,
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 passport control and security are located for departing
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. There are eight gates and two walkways now. After the development, more doors will be added to both
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 and arrival entrances. In the
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 space,
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 the check-in point will be relocated to the right to make room for bag drop, the cafe will be relocated to the left of the entrance. In the arrival area, some facilities, including a cafe and ATM, will be added to serve
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 a car hire will be built on the right side of the arrival hall. Beyond security areas, new shops will be built on the way connecting to eighteen gates, which will be accessed by a sky train.
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