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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that many
people
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 think that it is better to make peace with the bad
situation
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 which could be uncomplacent with their job or financial predicament
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 others think that they should focus on improving their
life
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. I believe in the latter opinion because it shows that in order to change a particular adversity
people
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 should have the
courage
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 and the right mindset. Most
people
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 in
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 encounter
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endless type of
problems
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 which leads to self-acceptance, probably
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 continuous trying to overcome the hindrances and failing at it might lead them to a perception of accepting the bad
situation
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.
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, A labour works hard in every aspect of time, so that, he can provide well for his family but no matter how much they work they still seemed to end up getting economic issues and most labourers chose to accept the
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 they received believing that it is destiny.
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, sometimes accepting the bad
situation
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 in
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 is the best thing one can do to avoid creating new
problems
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 there are individuals who like to be accountable for their actions and consider that, in
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 they can improve anything with a great mindset. Every person in their
life
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 has
problems
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 which they try to avoid and live a mediocre lifestyle,
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, the primary thing which they lack is
courage
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.
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, there are many entrepreneurs who lived in poor conditions despite that, they build a net worth that only some individuals dream of. They broke all the obstacles which came their way and with their sheer
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 they chose not to be complacent with the predicament.
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 of accepting some
problems
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, fighting against those issues will be more beneficial.
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, Some individuals consider to accept the bad
situation
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whereas
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 others believe in trying to change the outcome.
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, I agree on improving the
situation
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 shows that
people
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 have the
courage
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 to fight those hurdles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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