The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010.
The
bar
chart
presents information about the development of the participation of men in senior in three companies from 1980 to 2010.
This
bar
chart
talks about all data of three companies, which are IBM
, Microsoft
and Apple
. the bar
chart
has percentages of 0%-70%, Which summarizes the data between 1980 and 2010.
In following the bar
chart
, in
2010 has the most Change preposition
apply
percentage
than other years,which was showed
in three companies that are Wrong verb form
shown
IBM
, Microsoft
and Apple
, which are 62%,45% and 25% respectively. IBM
had the highest percentage
. In 1980, the percentage
was less than the others,which are IBM
, Microsoft
and Apple
. There are 2%,8%and 13%. The percentage
will increase every year. From 1980 to 2010, IBM
had the highest percentage
in 2010 and had
the least in 1985, which are 62% and 1% respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
Microsoft
had the highest in 2010 and the least in 1980, which are 45% and 8 % respectively. Apple
had the highest in 2010 and the least in 1985, which are 25% and 12 % respectively.Submitted by pramai177 on
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