The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The pie charts illustrate the average proportion of meal consumption of

sodium

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, saturated fat and extra sugar in the USA which might be harmful to the body if consumed excessively.

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, it can be seen that the consumption of

sodium

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and saturated fat is high in the dinner meal.

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added sugar is highly consumed in snacks. It is noticeable that all these three nutrients are used less in

breakfast

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Sodium

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and saturated fat are eaten with 43% and 37% of the total ingredients of dinner respectively, but these amounts are reducing as we observe the daily time meals and snacks.

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, 29% and 26 of lunch ingredients belong to

sodium

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and saturated fat in successive.

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, 14%

sodium

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is eaten in

breakfast

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and only 16% of it is eaten for

breakfast

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. Alongside the

sodium

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and saturated fat in each meal, added sugar is largely used in snack meals with 42%.

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, 23% and 19% of it are consumed at dinner and lunch respectively,

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, only 16% of

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unhealthy nutrient is used in

breakfast

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. It is undeniable that

breakfast

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contains the lowest amount of these nutrients among other meals.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nutrients
Unhealthy
Daily intake
Percentage
Carbohydrates
Fats
Proteins
Meals
Balanced diet
Consumption
Excess
Health implications
Obesity
Diabetes
Heart disease
Convenience foods
Fast foods
Socioeconomic factors
Lifestyle choices
Healthy eating habits
Dietary recommendations

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

The health benefits of physical exercise are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. what are the reason for this? What could be done to encourage them to exercise regularly?