The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the average working
hours
for primary, middle and high schools
of teachers
in four different countries in 2001.
In general, the hours
of teaching in the upper secondary and the lower secondary were higher than that of the others. Teachers
in the USA
worked longer hours
than those in Japan, Spain
, and Iceland
.
The length of work for primary schools
in the USA
was the highest amount of time (about 750 hours
), followed by the average working hours
in Spain
, with 650 hours
. The equivalent figure for Iceland
stood at around 600 hours
. This
was also
the lowest figure for primary.
Teachers
in the USA
spent the largest amount of time (at 1000 hours
) in lower secondary schools
, which was nearly double of
that in Change preposition
apply
Iceland
. Japanese and Spain
teachers
worked at middle schools
for over 700 hours
and about 650 hours
, respectively.
The highest amount of time for teaching at high schools
in the USA
was about 1100 hours
, followed by the figure for Iceland
(approximately 810 hours
), compared with 800 hours
in Spain
and 700 hours
in Japan.Submitted by windy.blog155 on
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