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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Climate
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 has become a worldwide issue in recent years, there are some scientists who suggest that we should do nothing but find a way to live with it. In my opinion, I disagree with
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 view. There are various measures that governments and individuals can take to prevent, or at least mitigate.
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governments can introduce laws to limit the carbon dioxide emissions that cause global warming. And they can impose “green taxes” on drivers, airline companies and other polluters and invest in renewable energy production which
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 solar, wind or water power.
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, individuals should limit our contribution to
climate
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. We can become more energy efficient ,
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 as flying less, using bicycles and public transport. And the public may affect the actions of governments by voting for politicians who propose to tackle
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, rather than those who suggest
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 it. If
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 of taking the above measures and simply trying to live with
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climate
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, the consequences will be disastrous. To give just one example,
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 cannot cope with the
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 that even a small rise in sea levels. It will cause millions of people
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 displaced by flooding in countries without
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 low-lying areas. People will lose their homes and their jobs and will be forced to migrate to nearby cities or perhaps to other countries. We may see outbreaks of disease and famine
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 increased homelessness and poverty. In conclusion, I believe it is necessary to take
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 seriously, and we should not try to adapt to it.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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