Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people feel that employees' attire at work is not important, and employers should pay more attention to their job content. I partially agree with
this
viewpoint, and I
also
believe that for certain jobs, standardized attire is necessary.
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telling their staff how to
dress
is seen as a positive trend.
For example
, some technology giants like Google and Facebook
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relaxed office environments. Their employees are encouraged to
dress
casually and the company executives and leaders always don't wear anything other than T-shirts and jeans. If people can be free to
dress
how they like, they may produce work of outstanding quality.
Therefore
, from the performance and global dominance of
such
companies, it is unnecessary for them to
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dress
codes in the technology sector. Rules regarding employees' clothing in other work situations
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needed.
For example
, some certain professionals,
such
as nurses, police officers and airline pilots wear uniforms because they have a practical or safety function and can help identify the person’s position or role in society.
In addition
, a lawyer, politician or school principal may wear formal clothing to portray an image of authority, trustworthiness and diligence. And it's necessary for these professionals to be in smart and formal attire. In conclusion, I think the
dress
code should not become strict and rigid, but it should
also
be changed for some professional situations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dress code
  • professional attire
  • workplace culture
  • productivity
  • branding
  • perception
  • creativity
  • equality
  • bias
  • discrimination
  • first impressions
  • freedom of expression
  • quality of work
  • skill set
  • professionalism
  • comfort
  • clientele
  • stakeholders
  • competence
  • formal attire
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