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Complain letter about air conditioner of the car which broyght 20 may from GDA servise

#air #conditioner #car #broyght #gda #servise
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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the problem air conditioner of the
car
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 which I brought 20 May from GDA
servise
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service
 I went to
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the job
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by
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 my
car
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.I can't take the bus ,
because
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ofbecause
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 health problems in me.I drove the new
car
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 for 3 days . But the air
contitioner
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conditioner
 broke.After driving for a few days.I started having serious headaches and
stomakace
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stomachache
. The
car
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 that I have rented Nexia1 model with number plate GP 966 MA .But before I bought the
car
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, I was told that the period was
guaranted
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guaranteed
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.
Unfotunately
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Unfortunately
, I did not drive for even 1 week and the warranty was 3 years.Despite I
then
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 contacted the campaign but have yet to hear back .I believe you will find a solution to
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 problem and help me. Yours faithfully, Sarvinoz
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