Complain letter about air conditioner of the car which broyght 20 may from GDA servise

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the problem air conditioner of the

car

which I brought 20 May from GDA

servise

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service

I went to

job

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the job

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car

.I can't take the bus ,

because

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health problems in me.I drove the new

car

for 3 days . But the air

contitioner

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conditioner

broke.After driving for a few days.I started having serious headaches and

stomakace

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stomachache

. The

car

that I have rented Nexia1 model with number plate GP 966 MA .But before I bought the

car

, I was told that the period was

guaranted

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guaranteed

granted

Unfotunately

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Unfortunately

, I did not drive for even 1 week and the warranty was 3 years.Despite I

then

contacted the campaign but have yet to hear back .I believe you will find a solution to

this

problem and help me. Yours faithfully, Sarvinoz

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132 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Complain letter about air conditioner of the car which broyght 20 may from GDA servise

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