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Semarang City is one of the areas that were often affected by flooding, both tidal flooding and flooding
due to
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river overflow. Factors that cause flooding
such
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as land use, high rainfall, high urbanisation rate, and lack of drainage capacity cause flooding to occur frequently.
This
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research aims to analyse past
flood
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inundation models using the HEC-RAS 2D model with model
validation
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using Landsat 7 ETM+ data and CHIRPS rainfall data. The results show that floods in 3 (three) events, namely 23 January 2014, 16 February 2017, and 30 April 2019 have different areas, namely 378.25 ha, 377.61 ha, and 310.53 ha.
Flood
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validation
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using Landsat 7 ETM+ satellite imagery using the wetness index value on each event is 81, 84, and 82 per cent respectively so the
flood
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model with wetness index has a high
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value. The variation of values in
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validation
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is caused by cloud disturbance and spatial resolution of DEM data of Semarang City. Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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