The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
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The presented illustration of the graph represents the expenditure on junk food in the Uk between 1970 and 1990. In general,the figures for the two main fast food increased rapidly until the
year
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1990,
whereas
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the consumption of
pizza
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changed slightly
at the end
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of the
year
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. It is interesting to note that at the beginning of the
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, the
data
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for
pizza
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emerged with 300
grams
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, which was much higher than that of convenience foods.
Furthermore
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,the amount of
pizza
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decreased sharply reaching just over 200
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in 1980,
while
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in
this
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year
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consumption of fish and cheaps increased dramatically.
Then
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this
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data
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reached a peak of 500
grams
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in 1990.
On the contrary
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,the expenditure on hamburgers increased gradually from 1970 to 1980,showing the same growth as fish and chips.After that,
this
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data
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moderately increased in the
last
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5 years but
as a consequence
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,the consumption of hamburgers rapidly went up reaching just under 300
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,that means
this
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data
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crossed and got the highest point than a
pizza
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, pizza, data, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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