The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The presented illustration of the graph represents the expenditure on junk food in the Uk between 1970 and 1990. In general,the figures for the two main fast food increased rapidly until the
year
1990,
whereas
the consumption of
pizza
changed slightly
at the end
of the
year
. It is interesting to note that at the beginning of the
year
, the
data
for
pizza
emerged with 300
grams
, which was much higher than that of convenience foods.
Furthermore
,the amount of
pizza
decreased sharply reaching just over 200
grams
in 1980,
while
in
this
year
consumption of fish and cheaps increased dramatically.
Then
this
data
reached a peak of 500
grams
in 1990.
On the contrary
,the expenditure on hamburgers increased gradually from 1970 to 1980,showing the same growth as fish and chips.After that,
this
data
moderately increased in the
last
5 years but
as a consequence
,the consumption of hamburgers rapidly went up reaching just under 300
grams
,that means
this
data
crossed and got the highest point than a
pizza
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, pizza, data, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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