The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in

the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons where

relevant.
The following pie charts depict a piece of information about online sales including electronics, appliances, home furnishings, food beverages, and
video
games
by genre in 5 years period from 2005 to 2010 in Canada. Looking from an
overall
perspective it is readily apparent that electronics and appliances were the main consumption for those who preferred to buy online, followed by food and beverages,
while
the least percentages accounted for the period were
video
games
and home furnishings. In 2005, electronics and appliances comprised two fourth of the data at 35 per
cent
, which was the highest number at that time, and
this
decreased slightly by 5 per
cent
in the final year surveyed.
Subsequently
, food and beverage, which accounted for a fourth of the chart in the first year, significantly went up by 10 per
cent
in 2010. In terms of
video
games
, stood at 18 per
cent
in the first period, and rose to 23 per
cent
from 18.
Lastly
, as for home furnishings, it showed a broadly similar trend as
video
games
, accounting for half of the figure at 25 per
cent
before falling considerably by 15 per
cent
in the final year.
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