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The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following pie charts depict a piece of information about online sales including electronics, appliances, home furnishings, food beverages, and
video
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games
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 by genre in 5 years period from 2005 to 2010 in Canada. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective it is readily apparent that electronics and appliances were the main consumption for those who preferred to buy online, followed by food and beverages,
while
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 the least percentages accounted for the period were
video
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games
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 and home furnishings. In 2005, electronics and appliances comprised two fourth of the data at 35 per
cent
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, which was the highest number at that time, and
this
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 decreased slightly by 5 per
cent
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 in the final year surveyed.
Subsequently
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, food and beverage, which accounted for a fourth of the chart in the first year, significantly went up by 10 per
cent
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 in 2010. In terms of
video
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games
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, stood at 18 per
cent
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 in the first period, and rose to 23 per
cent
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 from 18.
Lastly
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, as for home furnishings, it showed a broadly similar trend as
video
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games
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, accounting for half of the figure at 25 per
cent
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 before falling considerably by 15 per
cent
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 in the final year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words video, games, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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