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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, there are two different opinions, that to grow up children,
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 important to have
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disagreements
 with them,
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 others believe that it affects negatively
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the relations between parents and
teengers
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teenagers
.
However
, I agree with neither one or the
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. I believe that with some children you need to be strict, but with
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 you need to teach them
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the right way.
Firstly
,
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 clear that children, who develop with difficult
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conditions
, learn to be
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stronger and to overcome every obstacle in their lives,
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 makes them
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develope
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develop
 different ideas and earn new
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 about their
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. For Evidence, I know
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 famous football player Luka Modric, who plays
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 Real Madrid and has
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a successfull
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successfull carreer
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successful career
, but
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 childhood was very hard
,
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 because he had
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grow
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 up without his parents during the war in Croatia.
Although
 that, he managed to become a successful and famous person, who
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best
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 football player in World Cup in 2018.
On the other hand
, I believe that there are still many families, that learn their youngsters without violence and give them
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correct advice
 and support them during their development. That gives them more
confiedence
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confidence
 and
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freedom
 to face any daily problem calmly. There are many successful actors,
such
 as Tom Cruise, who is
inteligent
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intelligent
 and very confident,
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 makes him one of the
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 actors
on
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 Hollywood. In
this
 case,
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neccessary
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necessary
 to give
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the
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young people the right advice or to let them choose what is better for them. In conclusion, there is no need for much pressure on
teenages
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teenagers
 or much freedom in their decisions. They want good advice and guidance throughout their volunteer life.
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