Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health, others believe that government should make sure that their are healthy.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Everyone is concerned about their

health

and the

health

of their loved ones.

According to

the prevalent belief of certain

individuals

,

health

is one's own liability,

while

other

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argue that

health

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the health

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of

citizen

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citizens

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is linked with

state's

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the state's

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obligation. I believe that both

individuals

and

state

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the state

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can work in tandem in safeguarding people's

health

. Every person can take measures that support him in maintaining sound

health

. Most of the population do not follow a dietary plan so they are unable to have a balanced diet. They are not only unaware of the

body;s

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food

reqirement

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requirement

requirements

but

also

lack interest in consulting a

nutrionist

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nutritionist

,

Moreover

, the majority of the population nowadays have a sedentary

life style

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lifestyle

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.

As a result

of poor diet and lack of physical activity, people face several medical problems.

Consequently

, we see a surge in the number of patients facing diabetes and cardiovascular diseases .

For Instance

,

majority

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of the households have

atleast

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at least

one diabetic patient.

Therefore

, an

individuals

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role in safeguarding their

health

is very crucial.

On the other hand

, the

governement

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government

can

also

play

their

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its

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role in protecting the

health

of its citizen in various ways. They can discourage the consumption of unhealthy

products

by imposing heavy taxes on

products

.

For instance

, Sugar Tax

imposed

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is imposed

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on beverages by

Government

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the Government

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of

United

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the United

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Kingdom.

Moreover

, they can provide subsidies

on

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for

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healtheir

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healthy

products

., encouraging the masses

toward

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to

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consumption

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consume

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of healthier

products

.

Furthermore

, they should build awareness among

masses

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the masses

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about the benefits of having a healthy life.

For example

, adding nutrition as part of children's school education. In conclusion, I believe that everyone has his or her duty in developing a society of

the

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healthy

individuals

. Both citizens and government should play their part in mitigating the

health

issues among

masses

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the masses

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. A combined effort is needed to maintain the

health

of

the

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human beings.