Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?
It is a highly
debetable
question Correct your spelling
debatable
is
that woman should replace their Unnecessary verb
apply
last
name
after their wedding. While
others believe that they should not change their surname even they
are married. Correct word choice
if they
According to
my opinion, it is personal
choice. Add an article
a personal
Although
, in some Correct word choice
However
countries
it is necessary to change their Add a comma
countries,
name
.
To begin
with, Some
Change preposition
in Some
culture
and Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
tradition
Fix the agreement mistake
traditions
bride
have to choose Fix the agreement mistake
brides
hushbund
;Correct article usage
the hushbund
s
family Correct your spelling
's
name
as their family name
eventually, it is part of ritual
. Add an article
the ritual
a ritual
For instance
, in Indian customs girls have to shift their last
ame
Correct your spelling
name
as
their partner's Change preposition
to
name
. Moreover
, sometime
Replace the word
sometimes
this
process is abide
by law in some countries. To Wrong verb form
abiding
illustrates
, in Britain, to lease a house, it must be Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
similar
Correct article usage
a similar
last
name
for both hushbund
and wife. For that reason, many international Correct your spelling
husband
worker
find difficulties Change to a plural noun
workers
to find
Change preposition
in finding
accomodation
.
Correct your spelling
accommodation
On the other hand
, nowadays many feminist
Change to a plural noun
feminists
against
Add a missing verb
are against
this
notion. They belives
that girls should not Verb problem
believe
loose
their identity by changing their names. Replace the word
lose
Also
, they argue that,
it reflects their heritage, especially Remove the comma
apply
represent
their Wrong verb form
representing
genrations
. Correct your spelling
generations
generation
Furthermore
, many people decide to stick with their full name
though, they add their common law
partner's Add a hyphen
common-law
name
in it as well. One of
Change preposition
apply
the
example is well-known actress Kareena Correct article usage
apply
kapoor
khan, as she Change the capitalization
Kapoor
decide
to add her groom's Wrong verb form
decided
last
name
in
the very end of her full Change preposition
at
name
.
To summarize, I opine that, wheather
changing their full Correct your spelling
whether
name
or keeps
as it was before their Wrong verb form
keeping it
marraige
is Correct your spelling
marriage
girl's
choice. Correct article usage
the girl's
However
, to keep alive our traditional values, they should understand the value of their culture while
they are making their decision.Submitted by harshtrivedi78 on
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