Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?
It is a highly
debetable
question Correct your spelling
debatable
is
that woman should replace their Unnecessary verb
apply
last
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name
after their wedding. Use synonyms
While
others believe that they should not change their surname even Linking Words
they
are married. Correct word choice
if they
According to
my opinion, it is Linking Words
personal
choice. Add an article
a personal
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Although
, in some Correct word choice
However
countries
it is necessary to change their Add a comma
countries,
name
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, Linking Words
Some
Change preposition
in Some
culture
and Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
tradition
Fix the agreement mistake
traditions
bride
have to choose Fix the agreement mistake
brides
hushbund
;Correct article usage
the hushbund
s
family Correct your spelling
's
name
as their family Use synonyms
name
eventually, it is part of Use synonyms
ritual
. Add an article
the ritual
a ritual
For instance
, in Indian customs girls have to shift their Linking Words
last
Linking Words
ame
Correct your spelling
name
as
their partner's Change preposition
to
name
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
sometime
Replace the word
sometimes
this
process is Linking Words
abide
by law in some countries. To Wrong verb form
abiding
illustrates
, in Britain, to lease a house, it must be Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
similar
Correct article usage
a similar
last
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name
for both Use synonyms
hushbund
and wife. For that reason, many international Correct your spelling
husband
worker
find difficulties Change to a plural noun
workers
to find
Change preposition
in finding
accomodation
.
Correct your spelling
accommodation
On the other hand
, nowadays many Linking Words
feminist
Change to a plural noun
feminists
against
Add a missing verb
are against
this
notion. They Linking Words
belives
that girls should not Verb problem
believe
loose
their identity by changing their names. Replace the word
lose
Also
, they argue thatLinking Words
,
it reflects their heritage, especially Remove the comma
apply
represent
their Wrong verb form
representing
genrations
. Correct your spelling
generations
generation
Furthermore
, many people decide to stick with their full Linking Words
name
though, they add their Use synonyms
common law
partner's Add a hyphen
common-law
name
in it as well. One Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
the
example is well-known actress Kareena Correct article usage
apply
kapoor
khan, as she Change the capitalization
Kapoor
decide
to add her groom's Wrong verb form
decided
last
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name
Use synonyms
in
the very end of her full Change preposition
at
name
.
To summarize, I opine that, Use synonyms
wheather
changing their full Correct your spelling
whether
name
or Use synonyms
keeps
as it was before their Wrong verb form
keeping it
marraige
is Correct your spelling
marriage
girl's
choice. Correct article usage
the girl's
However
, to keep alive our traditional values, they should understand the value of their culture Linking Words
while
they are making their decision.Linking Words
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