You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your latter •Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •Say how your work could be done while you are away • Ask for his/her help in arranging it

Mr Bean I am writing to you to explain that I would like to work in its head office in another country. I was amazed when I knew its main office in the United States.

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I work in my country and It is

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bankrupt and the local currency is affecting me a lot.  In the

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there are a lot of mates that can do my work.

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idea with my brother and he is interested in the job. I am sure that he will do a great job for you. He has a graduate in business administration and he worked in a factory for a lot of years in a big position. I would like to ask you if don't bother you to help me with the organizing of

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. We could have a meeting among us.

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purpose. I am really looking forward to

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talking and I will ensure that all is good. Faithfully, Francisco Gonzalez