Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
These days for
business
people
advertisements have become indispensable. The presence of social media and internet connection has contributed to business
people
selling their products using marketing advertisements. In doing so, for ,some it has also
become an unnecessary expense on the goods brought for themselves via advertisement
. In the following ,paragraphs I will explain why I agree with this
statement.
To begin
with, the advancement of technology, particularly mobile phones and internet connections has changed the world around. In the field of business
people
always surf the internet and look for products and their uses making them aware of their uses,,however
for ,some it has not served their purposes. Lots of advertisement
is seen on social Medias these days making people
eager to use and experience them. For example
cosmetics, people
are spending huge amount of money on these items, all because they see things online and want to make themselves as it was advertised. But in reality, we are simply spending money on it, we can make a living without these items as well.
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Furthermore
the quality of the Add a comma
,Furthermore
advertisement
has also
contributed to the sales of their product. They use famous people
, actresses and actors so they can influence more people
to buy their product. ,,
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Usually
these Add a comma
,Usually
people
will be having lots of followers. The number of customers is directly proportional to the views they get from online advertisements. ,,
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Nevertheless
sometimes the consumers are more or less exploited by the amount of Add a comma
,Nevertheless
advertisement
. For instance
, an advertisement
on the usefulness of washing machines at home. We can manage washing clothes with our hands at home but we purchase because we knew it eases our work as mentioned in their marketing videos.
To conclude
promoting goods via any social media platform has an immense benefit to the business
people
as well as
for some customers. Whatsoever some people
in low-income groups suffer mentally from wanting to get the things which are not necessary. So advertisement
serves the business
purpose but for some ,customers it becomes a nuisance.Submitted by rinchennima77 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...