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The pir charts bellow how the percentage of five konds of book old by bookseller between 1972 and 2012

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The pie charts illustrate the information about five different categories of books, which were sold from 1972 to 2012 Looking from the
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that adult and children’s
fiction
 were popular during the whole period,
while
 travel and biography literature experienced considerable changes between 1972 and 2012. With regards to the first graph, three equal segments with the highest percentage were biography and
fiction
 books for both younger and older generations (each at 20%), followed by travel, at 15%. In a twenty-year period, customers still preferred
fiction
,
therefore
 its percentage made up almost 45% of the whole categories.
However
, stories about famous people slightly declined by 5%. In terms of the
last
 chart, adult
fiction
 witnessed the most significant raise in 2012, and its number accounted for almost half of
whole
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 sold products, compared with non-
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 literature
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 proportion decreased by 10% in both groups
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