some people believe that museums and historical places should be free of charge, while others think that visitors should pay to visit them. what is your opinion?
Historical
places
and museums
are places
of tourists
attraction all over the globe. Change the noun form
tourist
According to the
prevalent belief of certain individuals that no charges should be applied to visitors, Change preposition
The
While
others argue that some fee
should be paid by people visiting these places
. However
, I believe that fee
should be taken by those individuals who are paying Fix the agreement mistake
fees
visit
to these Fix the agreement mistake
visits
sites
supported by compelling reason
. The Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
fee
collected by the tourist not only contributes to the maintenance of these sites
but also
limits the number of people visiting them.
The money collected from the tourist's visit is one of the main sources of income of
any Change preposition
for
museums
and historical sites
. This
capital is utilized in generating funds for disbursing staff's salary and maintenance of the the
infrastructure. Even thoughRemove the redundancy
apply
,
the government allocate its budget to preserve these Remove the comma
apply
places
, but still
Add a comma
,still
this
budget is unable to meet the finances required to maintain these sites
. Subsequently
, other sources of revenue is
required apart from the government's fund. Change the verb form
are
For Instance
, Tourist fee
contribute to more than Fix the agreement mistake
fees
three-fourth
of the total revenue for Correct your spelling
three-fourths
Lahore
Museum.
Another benefit of imposing charges on visitors is that it Correct article usage
the Lahore
limit
the number of entrants visiting the place. It Change the verb form
limits
protect
Change the verb form
protects
sites
from unnecessary trafic
of people. Correct your spelling
traffic
Moreover
, this
barrier not only restrict
Drug addicts but Change the verb form
restricts
also
criminals to take shelter in these places
. As a result
, historical places
and museums
will be preserved for a longer duration of time. As an example, The Governement
of Italy started Correct your spelling
government
entrance
Correct article usage
an entrance
fee
to old museums
to protect them from becoming a
heaven Correct article usage
apply
to
drug addicts.
Change preposition
for
To conclude
, The act of charging the travellers during their visit not only supports the sites
financially ,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
protect
Correct subject-verb agreement
protects
it
from unwanted tourists . Correct pronoun usage
them
Therefore
, for the greater good state should collect fee
from the visitors.Fix the agreement mistake
fees
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