some people believe that museums and historical places should be free of charge, while others think that visitors should pay to visit them. what is your opinion?

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places

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are

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of

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attraction all over the globe.

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According to the

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prevalent belief of certain individuals that no charges should be applied to visitors,

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others argue that some

fee

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should be paid by people visiting these

places

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.

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, I believe that

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fee

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should be taken by those individuals who are paying

visit

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visits

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to these

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supported by compelling

reason

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. The

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collected by the tourist not only contributes to the maintenance of these

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but

also

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limits the number of people visiting them. The money collected from the tourist's visit is one of the main sources of income

of

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any

museums

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and historical

sites

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.

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capital is utilized in generating funds for disbursing staff's salary and maintenance of the

the

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infrastructure. Even though

,

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the government allocate its budget to preserve these

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, but

still

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this

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budget is unable to meet the finances required to maintain these

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.

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, other sources of revenue

is

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required apart from the government's fund.

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, Tourist

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fee

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contribute to more than

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of the total revenue for

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Museum. Another benefit of imposing charges on visitors is that it

limit

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the number of entrants visiting the place. It

protect

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sites

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from unnecessary

trafic

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traffic

of people.

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,

this

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barrier not only

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criminals to take shelter in these

places

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.

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, historical

places

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and

museums

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will be preserved for a longer duration of time. As an example, The

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government

of Italy started

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fee

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to old

museums

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to protect them from becoming

a

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heaven

to

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drug addicts.

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, The act of charging the travellers during their visit not only supports the

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financially

,

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but

also

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protect

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it

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from unwanted tourists .

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, for the greater good state should collect

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fee

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from the visitors.