In the digital age, video games, and TV consumption has increased. The same can have deleterious effects on a child's mental health. To what extent would you support this idea?

Nowadays
parents
one of the biggest concerns is child-rearing.
While
growing up a child or growing up children, sometimes it could be difficult watching their kid or kids 7/24.
However
, some fathers and mothers let their juveniles watch tv, play video games etc to silence their youngsters or child. Even though, people must not permit their young generations to sit on television for hours if they do not prefer their kids might be mentally ill.
Firstly
, providing that I mention regarding the current era of ours is consumes more quickly than anything.
Thus
TV series one episode is shortened by 40 minutes to approximately 20 minutes.
Likewise
, modern movies are not 2 or 3 hours. Average movie
last
1.5 hours. Within the utilization, some
parents
ignore their teens’ future,
such
as late talking, getting behind their peers etc.
Secondly
, all to speak of related to much more modernized
parents
strongly disagrees with other fathers & mothers. Thereby our period goes on a different track.
On the other hand
, information is much more accessible than at any time
due to
our time. Civilized today’s
parents
are attending some courses, reading parenting books and advising paediatricians for their babies. All in all, from my point of view, in our world and our time parenting changes from culture to culture, country to country.
Although
, avoiding their offspring by settling in front of the Television is one of the most irritating things to do. I am strongly believing that young guys must not be ignored especially for their future.
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