Many counties smoking in public places is illegal many people believe that just the ban is justified .

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as schools, hospitals, parks and

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,many of the

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members believe that it is a wonderful role because of

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huge

harms

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caused by smoking . So

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statement as smoking leads to destroying of public

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and our adolescence. Smoking in public regions

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as schools is not an accepted behaviour and it leads to

destruction

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of our

generations

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,

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when a teacher smoke in front of his student they will adopt

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behaviour un

conseincally

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continually

.

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, number of the smokers at teenagers will be increased

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will to destroying the

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of our new generation . As

somking

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smoking

is a monster it is the cause of many of the 21-century diseases

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as heart

diabites

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diabetes

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, smoking in Egypt is illegal in their schools the teachers of it went to

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smoke

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rooms, so the number of smoking students there was small. Smoking leads to a decline in

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general

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of the

societies

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members, the harmful of smoking is not stopped

on

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a smoker it

transferred

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to all the people around him.

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,gasses produced by cigarettes of the

somker

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smoker

it is not

hurts

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the

smoker

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lungs only it hurts

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recipient.

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provied

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dangerous

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of

cigertess

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fingerless

are extant to babies in their

moms

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belly

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,

to

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all people and trees around the smoker. In conclusion,

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many countries smoking is banned some people respect and agree with

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an

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amazing role. in my opinion ,it is one of the best

descions

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. Taken by any counties as it

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our children and public

health

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