The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart below compares
coffee
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and tea consumption habits in five cities in Australia,
according to
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the result of a survey, which measured all of them in the
last
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4 weeks before answering the questionnaire.
Overall
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, residents of all five cities do not have a strong habit of buying fresh
coffee
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.
In contrast
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with that, most of them tend to go to cafes to drink
coffee
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or tea. If we look at the figures for going to cafes,
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the most common habit of drinking and buying tea or
coffee
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among the people living in Hobart, Brisbane, Melbourne, and Sydney. It is noticeable that in Melbourne and Hobart, going to cafe shops has the highest rates among all the surveyed habits in other cities.
By contrast
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, In Adelaide, buying instant
coffee
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headed the list, by 50%, being slightly more than the figure for going to a cafe. Buying fresh
coffee
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has the lowest proportion in Brisbane, by just under 35%.
That is
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the least common habit among all of the measured ones. The highest rate of purchasing fresh
coffee
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belongs to Sydney, well above 40%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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