You are interested in an activity or hobby that one of your friends already has. Write a letter to this friend asking for information about it.
Dear Nigar
I HOPE ,YOU’RE WELL.I LOOK FORWARD TO MEETING WITH YOU.I’M WRITING
THIS
LETTER WITH REGARD TO YOUR HOBBY.ACTUALLY IT’S BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE WE SAW EACH OTHER.DO YOU REMEMBER WHEN WE MEET LAST
TIME?YOU TOLD ME ABOUT YOUR FAVORITE ACTIVITIES SUCH
AS PLAYING THE GUITAR,HANDICRAFT WORK AND TAKING PHOTOGRAPHS.YOU HAVE SAID YOU’RE PASSIONATE ABOUT HANDICRAFT WORK.AND YOU HAVE SPOKEN TO ME ABOUT THE DETAILS OF IT.FOR INSTANCE
,MATERIALS,NEEDLES,THREADS AND SEWING MACHINES.ALTHOUGH
YOU’VE COMPLAINED ABOUT THE DIFFICULT SIDES OF THIS
PASTIME,IT CREATED GREAT INTEREST IN MY MIND.SINCE THEN
I’VE LOOKED FOR SOMETHING THAT HAS CALMING
EFFECT. Correct article usage
A CALMING
FINALLY
, I FOUND THIS
RELAXATION.IT APPEARS THAT IT HELPS ME CHILL OUT.SO IT’S REALLY THERAPEUTIC AND GREAT STRESS BUSTER.I WOULD BE GRATEFUL IF YOU WOULD RECOMMEND SOME TIPS ABOUT IT.FURTHERMORE
, I WANT TO LEARN WHICH CLOTH IS VERY SUITABLE,WHICH SIZE OF NEEDLE I NEED AND WHICH COLORS OF THREAD ARE MORE TREND NOWADAYS. ALSO
, I WANT TO ASK FROM YOU IF THAT ARE ENOUGH FOR THIS
HOBBY OR NOT. BECAUSE I WILL TAKE UP A NEW ACTIVITY AND I HAVE TO PRACTISE ABOUT IT,I’M JUST AN AFICIONADO.IF I SAY HONESTLY ,I’M AFRAID I CAN’T
.I WATCHED SOME TUTORIAL VIDEOS ON YOUTUBE,BUT THEY SEEMED TOO DIFFICULT FOR ME.I THINK THAT THE BEST WAY OF LEARNING TAKE YOUR ADVICE.I NEED YOUR GUIDANCE.I WHOLEHEARTEDLY BELIEVE THAT WE’LL MEET SOON AND YOU’LL EXPLAIN TO ME THE EASIEST WAY.
SEE YOU SOON
AMINACorrect your spelling
IN’T
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter needs improvement. The ideas are not effectively organized and do not flow coherently.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate, but the overall tone of the letter needs to be more suitable for a formal letter.
task achievement
The letter lacks a clear focus and does not fully address the task. The response to the task prompt is incomplete.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.