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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g., paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons, and what can be done to solve this problem?

There are some difficulties in specific
countries
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 to recycle
garbages
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garbage
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 well,and some measures could be done to figure the problems out. The reasons why recycling cannot be done comprehensively might be a lack of awareness and economic attraction.
People
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 in most
countries
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 know that recycling
of
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waste
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 like paper, glass, and cans is a benefit to the person ,nation,and earth.
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, some do not take it
serious
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 and consider it as a fable.
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, those
people
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 would not take
effort
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an effort
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 on recycling and make
recycling
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the recycling
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of
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garbages insufficient.
Besides
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,recycling
waste
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 is a expertise,
that is
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 ,it needs experts and machines to make the procedures better.
This
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 always costs a lot. If recycling products cannot earn more money than making them, it would be no appeal to some
countries
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. To solve
above
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 questions, in person, they should gain knowledge about eco-friendly；in
countries
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, they should cooperate with other nations.
By acquiring
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 information about environmental protection can make
people
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 know the significance of recycling.
People
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 with that mindset would like to do more on
waste
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 recycled.
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,
countries
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 on Earth should collaborate with others. The strict recycling policy would lead
the
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countries
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,
who
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 already have economic issues, to get worse
in
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financial
situation
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.
As a result
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, the developed
countries
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 should give other
countries
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 financial support or skills support ,encouraging them to make some rules and measures about that. Good recycling systems matter to
environment
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, and they should be established by all residents on earth,no matter who they or their
countries
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 are. In conclusion,every individual and community is crucial for recycling
of
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waste
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 and they should help each other to make garbage recycled progress.

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