Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

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What do
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like to do? Every
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kind of enjoyment. On the
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visiting new places,
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and try
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to
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new types
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food
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others do not like them. They prefer to sit our home or
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not leave their
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country
and do not wonder
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things
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. today we will discuss these groups
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.
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, I want to talk about
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who love visiting
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different places and try to different
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. They are
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of
people
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who are loving adventures.
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these
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, life is short and
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why if you have an
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opportunities
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our world. At the same time, it
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to require for
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its own
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general culture. it is very important for them
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learning different
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, cuisine, life and geographics.
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, other groups who are not want to know different
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they do not go
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to another
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city
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or another
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country and even do not
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different
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cultures
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. because They feel happy
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region,city, village etc.
themselves
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.
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why they seem
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unnecessary.  In conclusion,
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is changing
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from person
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to person. Somebody can love to travel and they can be happy
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that.
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people
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do not like
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.
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of
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are
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separated
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this
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opinion. Because somebody
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not love
for
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apply
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trying new
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they
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don't
called traditional or not. True happiness is what
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feels, not what
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sees or where
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lives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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