The Bar graph below shows the Expenditure in Million Pounds on fast food items by income groups in the UK in 1990.
The bar graph below shows the Expenditure in
Million
Pounds
on fast food
items by income
groups in the UK in 1990.
Overall
, hamburger
was the most popular Add an article
the hamburger
a hamburger
with
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among
people
with high income
and average income
. Whereas
, people
with low income
spent the most on fish and chips.
For the
hamburger, Correct article usage
apply
people
with high income
spent more than 45 Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
million
pounds
on this
food
. Follow by was
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were
people
with average
Correct article usage
an average
income
spent about 30 million
pounds
on this
food
. In contrast
, people
with low income
only spent 15 million
pounds
to buy hamburger
.
Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
About
fish and chips, Change preposition
Regarding
people
with average
Correct article usage
an average
income
spent 25 million
pounds
on this
food
. Meanwhile, people
with high and low income
spent only 15 Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
million
pounds
on fish and chips.
With the
pizza, Correct article usage
apply
people
with high income
spent about 20 million
pounds
. People
with average and low income
only spent a
half and one third compared to Correct article usage
apply
people
with high income
respectively.Submitted by nhungnguyen1209931 on
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