The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These two given

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provide some information about various kinds of

crimes

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that have happened throughout the

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year in the United Kingdom

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some data that are related to the frequency of

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criminal actions among individuals from dissimilar

age

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groups.

Overall

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the

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most criminal activities have been done by young citizens in their youth.

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the

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violent

crimes

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were the most popular type of criminal

commitments

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throughout

this

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time frame.

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line

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graph, people who were older

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8 years old have committed a

crime

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, the

crime

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rate that started after the

age

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of 8 reached a peak of 80

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the

age

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of 20 and

then

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the rate of

crime

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showed a downward trend

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the

age

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of 28 . based on data that can be observed after the

age

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of 28,

It is clear that

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older dwellers displayed

lower

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tendency to commit a

crime

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. Moving into

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chart,

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the

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violent

crimes

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occupied the first rank among these four types of

crime

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at 46% and they were the most common

crime

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in Britain over the mentioned time, public order

crimes

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have been committed by a tiny minority of criminals.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words crimes, age, crime with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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9
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

The line graph depicts
The pie chart illustrates
reveals
displays
depicts
the trend of
the overall crime rate
steadily decreased
the distribution of
different types of crime
prevalent
accounts for
the most common crime
followed by
make up
a smaller proportion of
the total crimes
a smaller percentage
approximately
the remaining percentage
It is important to note that
reflects

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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Banking and payment methods. The role of banks in the modern world. Large banks and their work. Working with clients.

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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